Nnnnnnghhhhh. This is so gorgeous and so hot! The rimming just about killed me, of course, and I love how you used details about Bill's loose hair brushing against Charlie's skin, guhh. Also liked the line about "a lathered race horse."

You've done such a nice job with the Bill/Charlie dynamic too -- I don't know why I love this pairing so much since it's so angsty, but ah, it hurts so good. I love that Bill left his earring behind. ♥

Thank you!!!