I really want to list my favorite parts from this, but I read it, and then read it again, and I can't because if I do I'd have to just copy/paste the whole thing. Because I love all of it.
Teddy's voice in this is just wonderful, the humor and pining and instructions and observations, and how he tried so hard to be what he thought that Harry might want him to be, and then when it finally happened all Harry wanted was for him to be himself. Your use of second person narrative was masterfully done. It's such a hard POV to write from, and you pulled it off perfectly.
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I really want to list my favorite parts from this, but I read it, and then read it again, and I can't because if I do I'd have to just copy/paste the whole thing. Because I love all of it.
Teddy's voice in this is just wonderful, the humor and pining and instructions and observations, and how he tried so hard to be what he thought that Harry might want him to be, and then when it finally happened all Harry wanted was for him to be himself. Your use of second person narrative was masterfully done. It's such a hard POV to write from, and you pulled it off perfectly.