traintracks: (Hermione and Harry Smiling by wikidwitch)
traintracks ([personal profile] traintracks) wrote2013-03-05 11:26 am

"A Thousand Golden Feathers", Harry/Hermione, R

Title: A Thousand Golden Feathers
Author: [personal profile] traintracks
Pairing: Harry/Hermione (pre-Hermione/Ron)
Rating: R
Words: 100
Warnings: underage (16)
Summary: Harry lends a comforting hand. (set in HBP)
A/N: Written for [community profile] harry100's prompt, "prohibited".





She loves him, and that's okay. He's being a daft prick, and we're in a dark room, just Hermione and me. Her tears haven't even dried, but I've got her pressed to a wall, her robed bottom pressed forbiddenly against my robed crotch. I've got my hand inside, though, 'round front -- inside robes, trousers, panties -- and I've got two fingers circling her clit.

We're quiet, and her hips barely buck, just a whisper of movement, enough to tease my cock.

When she comes, no name escapes her lips, and a thousand golden feathers still fall around our shoulders.

[identity profile] tamlane.livejournal.com 2013-03-05 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh! This pairing is a guilty pleasure of mine, and that was delicious. Mmm.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-03-05 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yeah, I rarely write them, but sometimes, they're just asking for it. ;-)
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[personal profile] drarryisgreen 2013-03-05 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh!!! I don't usually read het but glad I read this one. I can't handle 100 words :D

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-03-05 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!! I'd read some really great true drabbles recently and decided it was time for one. I often let myself off the hook and do, like, 1,300 words in 100 word pieces instead. I find that doing a real drabble, that limitation, can be very inspiring. It makes me think about brevity and economy of language in my longer pieces, too. :-)
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[personal profile] drarryisgreen 2013-03-05 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL I am an idiot... I meant to write:

I can't handle more than 100 words in het.

Ha. In any case. Great story, nonetheless, I'd read Harry and Hermione, I think I like it more than Draco/Hermione which I still cringe at. :D
drarryisgreen: (danrad)

[personal profile] drarryisgreen 2013-03-05 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
But, I agree. I like doing drabbles in 100's b/c it really ends up being more meaningful.

PS. I wrote a harry/sirius one for jmdc you should tell me what you think of it! I am still working on my long fic writing. The one I wrote for jmdc is 700 words.
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[personal profile] elrhiarhodan 2013-03-05 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm. No other words are necessary.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-03-05 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, luv! Always makes me smile hugely to get a comment from you. <3 :-D
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[personal profile] 0idontknow0 2013-03-05 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I loved that.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-03-05 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!!!