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traintracks ([personal profile] traintracks) wrote2013-05-03 06:49 pm

"Better in the Dark", Harry/Draco, NC-17

Title: Better in the Dark
Author: [livejournal.com profile] traintracks
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~465
Content: blowjob, wanking, fuck buddies (sort of), Aurors
Summary: After a job well-done, another one. ;-)
A/N: Un-beta'd, so watch out!





It was a good thing they were talented Aurors, because they were bad at waiting, and they did enjoy a good caught-the-bad-guy shag.

They caught the bad guy a lot.

There was a lot of celebrating to be had.

They just couldn't always make it back to one or the other's flat, right?

Any dark alley would do when it was so easy to throw out this or that illusion and confound the Muggles.

"Get it out," Draco breathed, his own cock already in hand, his hand already a blur.

"Bloody hell, give me two seconds, Malfoy."

"No," Draco replied, shoving Potter's hands away, going to his knees, and taking over the pulling-down-the-pants part. Honestly, Potter could be a slow draw.

Draco opened Potter's trousers, yanked, and the heavy prick fell into his waiting mouth. They both groaned.

"You know you...should have let me...Legilimens him sooner... Could have gotten...some good intel before... Jesus, Malfoy..."

Draco sucked off. "Do you ever shut up? Your cock's getting blown, for Merlin's sake."

Potter put a clumsy hand on Draco's head and put him back where he wanted him.

"I'm just saying," he sighed, starting to thrust a lazy rhythm into Draco's face.

It was over rather fast, but then again that was the point. They'd probably both been hard for the better part of a couple of hours now. This was literally the first alley they'd stumbled upon and thus into. Potter, at least, let Draco establish a good head bob, only meeting him halfway. That's how they liked it best, even if neither would admit to such under any kind of penalty of perjury.

As Potter whined like a sleepy werewolf and shot over Draco's licking tongue, Draco wanked himself until he spilled all over the alley pavement at Potter's feet.

And it was bloody good. Fast and dirty like Draco loved almost nothing else. Except maybe a Quidditch match.

Potter pulled out, cursing softly. Draco stood. They adjusted their clothes, breathing in the dark. Draco licked his lips free of Potter's hot spunk.

"That was brilliant," Potter sighed. He tended to get mouthy and complementary after he'd recently ejaculated. Draco wasn't complaining.

"Brilliant," he agreed.

"I'm starving."

"Thirsty," Draco replied.

"Want to hit a pub? Fish and chips sounds heavenly right now."

"I could go for a pint."

"Right then," Potter agreed.

They moved the barriers with them as they left the alley, so that when they slowly removed them, they were just a couple of blokes nobody noticed before, strolling casually down the pavement, not even close (all right, maybe close) to touching.

They weren't lovers.

They weren't anything like that.

Even if they smelled like one another.

That's the just the way their own particular thing worked.

Their magic...

It worked better in the dark.
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[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
:-DDD

You seriously make me smile so hard.

Thank you, darlin'.

<3333

[identity profile] kedavranox.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
What she said. Cause I'm not half as eloquent right now...

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
She's wonderfully eloquent, isn't she? I mean, she thinks she's not, but I'll take this comment any day. :-D

Thank YOU, too! :-)
Edited 2013-05-04 02:39 (UTC)

[identity profile] mab.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
LOVE!!!

Man, I just adore the quick and dirty, getitoutNOW-ness here. Then, everything's just righto, what shall we eat? :P

Perfect!

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Thank you so much! :-D Yeah, I love it when the boys try to act like it's nothing -- when it's everything. ;-)

[identity profile] tamlane.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG I love this!!! So much hot and funny and poignant in such a neatly wrapped little package!

LOL @ Draco rushing through apprehension of the suspect just to get to the hot alley sex.

Love the dialogue. (Even if Draco doesn't, heehee.)

And this!
only meeting him halfway. That's how they liked it best, even if neither would admit to such under any kind of penalty of perjury.
Sigh. So many OTP feels.

You're brilliant.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-04 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU!!! If we're twins, it's fraternal rather than identical, since you write het and I write slash, LOL!!!

\o/
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[personal profile] elrhiarhodan 2013-05-04 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I am definitely getting my mind blow here.

HOT AND FUCKING GORGEOUS.

Love how the two of them are NOT lovers, if only to themselves.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-05 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, bb! :-D <3

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2013-05-05 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Great last line! And very hot. :)

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-05 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU! :-DD
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[personal profile] drarryisgreen 2013-05-06 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
This was awesome. ♥

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-05-07 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! Love your icon!

[identity profile] geneva2010.livejournal.com 2013-07-08 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Potter whined like a sleepy werewolf and shot over Draco's licking tongue

What a great image, wow. I also loved the way you had them remove the Disillusionment barriers in such a unique way; a lot of thought went into just that little detail.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-07-08 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, thank you! What a treat to get your wonderful comments today! A real gift. :-)

[identity profile] geneva2010.livejournal.com 2013-07-08 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
I am glad to discover you through the smoochfest reveals. I love your writing!

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-07-08 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU!

I haven't been able to read anything from the fest yet. But I really, really want to, and someday soon I'm going to go through one by delicious one. <3

Fall/Winter Round 2013 - Nominations List #1

[identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com 2013-10-03 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
User [livejournal.com profile] hpfanficfanpoll referenced to your post from Fall/Winter Round 2013 - Nominations List #1 (http://hpfanficfanpoll.livejournal.com/19573.html) saying: [...] DRARRY (DRACO MALFOY X HARRY POTTER) Best Drabble "Better in the Dark" [...]

Re: Fall/Winter Round 2013 - Nominations List #1

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-10-03 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
WOW, thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] amorette.livejournal.com 2013-10-03 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
Soooooo good :) Love the mood youve created, and everything you said about their relationship - you showed us such a clear picture of who they are and what their personalities are like, their relationship dynamic, their feelings for one another ... all in under 500 words. My favorite detail was Harry getting "mouthy and complementary after he'd recently ejaculated." It's really sweet and it makes me want to read more of this verse.

Brilliant.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-10-04 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you so much!!!!! :-)

[identity profile] iwao.livejournal.com 2013-11-06 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh.My.God. Ok, so this is beyond perfect. This is a whole novel length fiction condensed in under 500 words. I can't believe the way you write. And I'm not surprised this has been nominated (how many times?) Now, how, when and where is the voting taking place? :D

(BTW, I know what I'll be doing with the rest of tonight-or the rest of the week, depending on how many stories you have! :D If I fall asleep at work tomorrow, I'll totally blame you! LOL!)
Edited 2013-11-06 19:56 (UTC)

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-11-06 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you thank you thank you!!! I'm so happy that this feels like a condensed novel to you! What a great compliment!

I have no idea how to vote or any of that. LOL. I appreciate you wanting to!

And I'm so thrilled you want to read more! :-D

[identity profile] alexicyn.livejournal.com 2013-11-19 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Found this through the fanfic nominations. A nomination well deserved. This was BRILLIANT! Fast, and dirty, and hot. Just like our boys! Congrats! :)

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2013-11-20 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :-)
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[personal profile] birdsofshore 2014-01-02 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Delicious. Heavenly, hot and heavy.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-01-02 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :-DD

ART: Any Dark Alley (NC-17)

[identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com 2014-04-01 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
User [livejournal.com profile] dracotops_mods referenced to your post from ART: Any Dark Alley (NC-17) (http://dracotops-harry.livejournal.com/264642.html) saying: [...] had in mind, and that you like the result! The title is from a line in your fic Better in the Dark [...]