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traintracks ([personal profile] traintracks) wrote2014-02-02 01:11 pm

Porn Sunday Drabble-Thingy: "Deathless as Stars", Bill/Charlie, Hard R

Title: Deathless as Stars
Author: [livejournal.com profile] traintracks
Pairing: Bill/Charlie
Rating: hard R
Words: 190
Summary: Charlie and Bill keep "coming" into one another's orbits.
Warnings: incest, deep-throating, infidelity
A/N: Unbeta'd. For the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] torino10154's Porn Sunday 2014! Sorry this is so short and angsty and minus the money shot. *headdesk*



Bill drew on the cigarette and rested his free hand on Charlie's bobbing head. He blew the smoke out into the night, his words forming shapes that dissipated: "Nobody gives head like you."

Tomorrow they'd go back – Egypt and Romania, dragon fire and curses.

Big brother, little brother.

Right now, all of that fell away.

Charlie started deep-throating Bill's heavy cock, the sounds obscene, almost violent.

Bill drew on the cigarette, his hand beginning to shake.

"That's my boy," he whispered, thrusting slow.

Tomorrow, he'd be Fleur's husband and Charlie would be gone.

Bill looked up into the clear heavens – the planets and the void and the binary stars, forever whipping around in one another's crazy orbits.

He and Charlie had gravity. He and Charlie had forever in half-hour time slots.

Bill cupped the back of his brother's close-cropped head and gazed down at his spit-smeared lips. Soon his come would be running down his brother's chin. Soon the cigarette would burn out.

They had all the time in the world, deathless as stars.

They had no time at all.

Bill flicked off the ash, closed his eyes, and shuddered.




[identity profile] sophie-french.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, thank you! ♥

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank YOU!

[personal profile] snegurochka_lee 2014-02-02 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, that was lovely! Lots of stuff packed into 190 words. Love the atmosphere with the cigarette. ♥♥♥

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!! :-)
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[personal profile] torino10154 2014-02-02 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG Gorgeous!!! That's just so hot and angsty and yes! Love, love it. Marvelous work, dear.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so happy you liked it! <3

[identity profile] dicta-contrion.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Jeeez. Are you a porn wizard? Cause this is magical.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, this made me snort with joy! LOL! THANK YOU!!!
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[personal profile] birdsofshore 2014-02-02 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, *sob*

And *choke*

Beautifully done. What a great big ball of hot glorious angst in 190 words.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!!! :-D
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[personal profile] elrhiarhodan 2014-02-02 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This. This.

I have no words for the perfection in this.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
You don't need words with an icon of perfect hotness like that. ;-9

Thank you, dear!!! <3

[identity profile] sksdwrld.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
When I saw this, I dropped everything to read it. My god, your brilliance is as deathless as stars...my heart...my fucking heart!

Bill and Charlie forever!

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, thank you so much!!! :-DD
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[identity profile] notearchiver.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
oooohhhhh. You know how much I love you when you write angst, right? *melts in puddle of feels*

(I also have a bookmark folder dedicated to Bill/Charlie thanks to you :D)

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
A convert! \o/ Thank you so much, Note!!!

[identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
wow. You are really turning me onto Bill/Charlie as a pairing.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU!!! I feel like I really ought to give them their own link in my ML now, too.
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[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-02 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you SO MUCH! Story-telling was NOT happening today, so I went with atmosphere. I'm so happy it worked for you! <3

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you!!!!
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[personal profile] 0idontknow0 2014-02-03 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
190 words full of feels.
Feels.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!
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[personal profile] capitu 2014-02-03 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
This is gorgeous. There's something almost sad about it, but damn it if I'm not in love with this moment. Beautiful.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, it's sad. I was down because I finished DTH and I missed them. LOL!

Thank you so much, C!

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[identity profile] livejournal.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
User [livejournal.com profile] torino10154 referenced to your post from 4th Annual Porn Sunday Master List (http://torino10154.livejournal.com/543564.html) saying: [...] Albus/Scorpius, Lorcan/Lysander, NC-17, 1250 by Deathless as Stars [...]

[identity profile] luvscharlie.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That's really beautifully done. I have a weakness for this pairing. Always have.

I particularly loved this line: Tomorrow they'd go back – Egypt and Romania, dragon fire and curses.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, thanks so much!!!
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[personal profile] firethesound 2014-02-03 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
::flails::

How are you so amazing at everything? This was hot, but also beautiful and with just a little hint of guilt and sadness and inevitability.

This especially hit me: "He and Charlie had forever in half-hour time slots."

Loved it!

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness, thank you so much!! You're too nice to me! LOL!

[identity profile] wwmrsweasleydo.livejournal.com 2014-02-03 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Fantastic! So much in there.

[identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com 2014-02-04 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much!!!