February DD: "nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate", Albus Severus/James Sirius, NC-17

[traintracks]

My February offering at daily_deviant is now up!

Title: nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate
Author: traintracks
Characters/Pairings: Albus Severus/James Sirius (brief, nonexplicit Harry/Draco, Hermione/Ron, George/Angelina, Ginny, Scorpius)
Rating: NC-17
Kinks/Themes Chosen: bottoms
Other Warnings: incest, brief mention of underage (though they're 20/22 in this)
Word Count: 3,025
Summary/Description: My beta wanted me to title it with this, but I think it makes a decent summary: 'James: Cockwhore (especially for his brother)'.
Author's Notes: This might be more "bottoming" than "bottoms". Big thanks to sdkshelly for the beta and title, which is from Radiohead's, "Fitter Happier".

Comments

[sophie-french.livejournal.com]

Arghhhh can't read it right now because family is requesting my presence, but I will as soon as I can!!! :)

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

That is THE fastest response to not being able to read something ever. LMAO! Take your time. It's not going anywhere. ;-)

<3

[sksdwrld.livejournal.com]

Your fics leave me inarticulate and fucking flailing idiotically. Your brilliance reduces me to incoherency.

Fuck. FUCK! Please, just let me kneel at your feet and put my head close to you that I might absorb...

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

LOL! Thank you so much!!!!

[gracerene]

!!!

This hasn't shown up on my feed yet, so thanks for posting! I love this pairing and I am so excite right now!

*wanders off to read*

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it! :-)

[capitu]

OMG!!!!!! You! You! You are wonderful. I don't know how you do it, but you do it every time. SO hot.

I love this pairing. It's like it's my birthday all over again. :D

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

What a lovely compliment! Thank you!!!

[firethesound]

You!! Congratulations, you've single-handedly turned James/Albus from a guilty pleasure to an obsession for me. This was so incredibly hot, and I nearly died when James started using the guilt of what they were doing against Albus, calling him a sick little bastard because it makes him come harder to think about how fucked up it is what they're doing and HOLY HELL SOMETIMES I AM SURE YOU'RE TRYING TO KILL US ALL THROUGH SHEER HOTNESS OVERLOAD BECAUSE OH MY GOD. And how they know it's wrong and they just don't care and can't even keep their hands off each other (or cocks out of each other) through one dinner and James being so sore but wanting it anyhow and smelling Albus because they hadn't cleaned up overly well after the first time, and I just. You. YOU. This whole thing was just so dirtyhotwrong and somehow it all just felt so right.

You are amazing and I worship your brain.

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

Your comments are amazing! They always make me want to reread my own story, hahaha!!! Thank you!!! :-D

[firethesound]

Lol, and I didn't even have to resort to random keyboard mashing this time. (It was a near thing, I'll tell you.)

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

Keyboard smash is one of my favorite responses!!! :-)

[firethesound]

I'll keep that in mind for future comments, lol.

[youcantseeus.livejournal.com]

You are making me ship these two so hard and I never, ever thought I would be a James/Albus shipper. I love the dynamic you create between them and how they give one another a difficult time. And bottom!James! You make me love bottom!James so much.

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

What a great compliment -- thank you!!! :-)

[amorette.livejournal.com]

IAWTC

She's literally the reason I ship them now.

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

OH!!!! You're so excellent!!!

(But what is IAWTC?)

[amorette.livejournal.com]

"I Agree With This Comment" :D

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

Ahhh, of course! I was close. ("I Am With The Committee.")

LMAO!

[amorette.livejournal.com]

Yes :D That too.

[amorette.livejournal.com]

LOVE IT! You are literally the queen of this pairing. You just get how to write their tension in the way I like best ;) Amazing job, as usual. Very hot!

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

Wow, thank you so much!!! So so much!!!!