I was somewhat uncertain going into this; cross-gen/age-disparity and daddy-kink aren't usually things I look for, but I love your fic so I knew I had to try.
First, your characters were just spot. I loved Charlie and his... jaded matter-of-factness. And Harry was so ornery. Draco prickly, and Charlie describing their courtship as being like bathing a cat was just perfect. And Teddy! Such a lovely combination of innocence and manipulation.
The sex was just guh. In all its permutations. When Harry and Draco were blowing Charlie.... and when Teddy morphed into Harry. Guh.
And then the ending.. Which took me by surprise and just... how kinda broken Charlie was and... how much it all just seemed to make sense the stuff he said, his attitude throughout. And the future... how bittersweet it feels because.. something will change, it will have to. And I can only hope Charlie can... I guess grow beyond simpply rolling with the punches. Because contentment is okay, but I want so much more for him, though I am uncertain he will ever really reach out and take it.
(You aren't getting porny icon because this makes me feel very 'puff and tender)
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Date: 2014-01-19 01:44 pm (UTC)I was somewhat uncertain going into this; cross-gen/age-disparity and daddy-kink aren't usually things I look for, but I love your fic so I knew I had to try.
First, your characters were just spot. I loved Charlie and his... jaded matter-of-factness. And Harry was so ornery. Draco prickly, and Charlie describing their courtship as being like bathing a cat was just perfect. And Teddy! Such a lovely combination of innocence and manipulation.
The sex was just guh. In all its permutations. When Harry and Draco were blowing Charlie.... and when Teddy morphed into Harry. Guh.
And then the ending.. Which took me by surprise and just... how kinda broken Charlie was and... how much it all just seemed to make sense the stuff he said, his attitude throughout. And the future... how bittersweet it feels because.. something will change, it will have to. And I can only hope Charlie can... I guess grow beyond simpply rolling with the punches. Because contentment is okay, but I want so much more for him, though I am uncertain he will ever really reach out and take it.
(You aren't getting porny icon because this makes me feel very 'puff and tender)