This was so flippin' joyful. I may be smiling all night.
Brilliant writing throughout.
The whole lamb gag with Ron at the beginning - that was really funny.
Something like a lazy chuckle escaped from Potter then. He looked at Draco as though he were somehow…delightful incalculable. That look and that sound, directed at him, almost hurt. Draco swallowed and blinked his gaze away. Draco's wanting is so endearing!
It turned out that when Draco wasn't busy being the Dark Lord's errand boy and once Potter got off his high Gryffindor horse…lion…what have you, they met at a middle ground where sometimes words weren't even necessary they were so in sync. What a fantastic description of the connection between our two favorite boys.
Then he took the sheet and, so slowly it hurt, dragged it off Draco's cock, which quite embarrassingly pointed straight at him ('YOU! I want YOU!'), OMG - LOL. I love how self-deprecating Draco is!
Potter looked like he was trying to figure out a particularly dodgy yet endearing puzzle. "You are the biggest surprise of my life," he said finally. You made this whole fic so emotionally, wonderfully satisfying. LOVE.
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Date: 2013-09-25 06:53 am (UTC)Brilliant writing throughout.
The whole lamb gag with Ron at the beginning - that was really funny.
Something like a lazy chuckle escaped from Potter then. He looked at Draco as though he were somehow…delightful incalculable. That look and that sound, directed at him, almost hurt. Draco swallowed and blinked his gaze away. Draco's wanting is so endearing!
It turned out that when Draco wasn't busy being the Dark Lord's errand boy and once Potter got off his high Gryffindor horse…lion…what have you, they met at a middle ground where sometimes words weren't even necessary they were so in sync. What a fantastic description of the connection between our two favorite boys.
Then he took the sheet and, so slowly it hurt, dragged it off Draco's cock, which quite embarrassingly pointed straight at him ('YOU! I want YOU!'), OMG - LOL. I love how self-deprecating Draco is!
Potter looked like he was trying to figure out a particularly dodgy yet endearing puzzle. "You are the biggest surprise of my life," he said finally. You made this whole fic so emotionally, wonderfully satisfying. LOVE.