Oh my goodness!!! I'm so happy I stumbled onto this magnificent story!
There's so much lovely writing! "He'd shagged Scor like everything was all right – like Teddy wasn't balefully alone in the room three doors down, empty of memory, stripped of everything love was made from." I mean wow. That's just beautiful.
And I how you characterized everyone, esp hilariously boisterous Al. "Lils, he doesn't bloody recognize you," Al provided with zero tact." And "Dad – how's the Auror business?" Haha.
And wonderfully wicked Scorpious! That devious mastermind. I was panicking as my scroll bar was nearing the bottom of my screen, and I thought Nooo, this cant be over yet! Not like this! I need more! And then I saw that blessed "Go to Part 2" and I could breathe again. Off to read more! <3
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Date: 2015-03-08 05:45 pm (UTC)There's so much lovely writing! "He'd shagged Scor like everything was all right – like Teddy wasn't balefully alone in the room three doors down, empty of memory, stripped of everything love was made from." I mean wow. That's just beautiful.
And I how you characterized everyone, esp hilariously boisterous Al. "Lils, he doesn't bloody recognize you," Al provided with zero tact." And "Dad – how's the Auror business?" Haha.
And wonderfully wicked Scorpious! That devious mastermind. I was panicking as my scroll bar was nearing the bottom of my screen, and I thought Nooo, this cant be over yet! Not like this! I need more! And then I saw that blessed "Go to Part 2" and I could breathe again. Off to read more! <3