October DD: "Do I Dare to Eat a Peach?", Harry/Teddy, NC-17

[traintracks]

Title: Do I Dare to Eat a Peach?
Author: traintracks
Written for: daily_deviant
Pairings: Harry/Teddy, Harry/OMC, Teddy/OMCs, (background Dean/Ginny, past Teddy/Victoire and Harry/Ginny)
Rating: NC-17
Kinks/Themes Chosen: sex clubs
Other Warnings: group sex, anonymous sex, cross-gen (39/22); godfather/godson; very brief mentions of BDSM (not the main pairing)
Word Count: ~7,600
Summary/Description: In which Harry is having a mid-life crisis and Teddy is just having a crisis.

Comments

[kedavranox.livejournal.com]

I'm too lazy to log into insanejournal, so I will have to telly ou here that that fic was perfection.

THANK YOU for adding some humanity and guilt into the equation. I've read so many fics where Harry is just like.. oh, I'm fucking Teddy Lupin? Boy I raised from a baby? Okay.. this is hott. Without tapping into that deeper humanity or touching on the way Harry might react. This was so good. With just the right amount of guilt and angst and SEX. Omg. the sex was hot. You rule at smut scenes darling. Can you teach meeeee?

♥

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

Wow, you just so don't need my help, woman!

Thank you so much for this amazing comment! For me, it's simply not as hot if Harry is all right with it -- if he doesn't acknowledge what he's supposed to be to Teddy. My head canon tends to be that Teddy's Gran raised him for the most part specifically so it's more believable to me that Harry could go there. As I was telling nattish over on the DD page, I'm more picky about incesty matters when it come to Harry than I am, say, the Weasleys (about whom I am not picky AT ALL apparently). ;-) I'm also much pickier and much more easily squicked by parent/child incest (and things resembling it) than sibling incest. So the Harry/Teddy thing, for me, needs to be just so. And then if it is, the guilt makes it just so. much. HOTTER. ;-)

I adore this comment. Thank you for it! \o/

[peanuts-mum.livejournal.com]

Holy shit! That is insanely hot! You write some of the best smut I've ever read, and I'm almost embarrassed to admit that that I'd a huge amount ;-)

[traintracks.livejournal.com]

What a wonderful compliment! THANK YOU SO MUCH! :-D