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Title: Consolation Prize
Author: [livejournal.com profile] traintracks
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Words: 100x3
Summary: There are no losers in this game.
Content: post-Quidditch shower sex ('nuff said)
A/N: Written for [livejournal.com profile] harry100's prompt 227, "Champion" but more importantly for [livejournal.com profile] capitu's birthday!!!!! I hope it is a fabulous one! Thank you for all you do for this fandom. <3 (Unbeta'd, so my apologizes for any mistakes! But a big thank you to [livejournal.com profile] birdsofshore for the teensy Brit-pick! The loo is now the bathroom! \o/)




It's not the locker room showers where they meet afterward anymore but the one at home. Harry's done his best to recreate the ambiance, of course, though he's stopped short of manufacturing the smell of feet.

When they finish their game, and Harry has once again caught the Snitch, it's time for him to claim his prize as the rightful champion.

Draco rolls his eyes and trudges indoors as though it is a trying ordeal.

"Cheer up, Malfoy," Potter tells him. "The odds are all for you catching it again someday."

They've reached the bathroom, and Potter's begun to strip.



Under the water, Draco says it, "Well, Potter. Take your prize." It's bloody difficult not to smile, to keep sneering, but he manages.

Harry-- no, Potter -- looks like an arrogant git. Draco's cock swells.

Potter slams him to the wall. Draco's breath leaves him in a rush.

Potter's on his knees in no time and drawing Draco's cock deep into his mouth. Draco goes fully hard with two bobs of Potter's head. He reaches up and wraps his hands around the showerhead, closing his eyes on the glory that is Harry Potter's mouth.

Draco pants, and Potter hums softly.



Draco would drop his hand into Harry's hair and stroke it. He'd hold his face and thrust like mad. But this is Potter's win. Draco isn't supposed to want it.

Never mind that he let Harry win. Never mind that Harry knows this, knows they're well-matched.

Draco comes a high whine into Harry's mouth, peeks down to watch his spunk dribble out over Potter's lips. Closes his eyes again, because it's too good.

Potter stands, grinning, triumphant.

"Well?" he asks. "What do you want for your consolation prize?"

Draco glances down at Harry's cock. He meets his eyes again…and smiles.


Date: 2014-02-12 06:22 pm (UTC)
eidheann_writes: (porny riding)
From: [personal profile] eidheann_writes
haha

I love the playfulness of this... The "Draco would, but Malfoy can't" bit (and the fact they only are willing to take this so far: no smelly feet = yay!

And the sex is scorching as always. I don't know how often I can say that, I feel like I need to make a macro. Whenever I comment on anything in your journal, add "And the sex was scorching hot like BURNING"

(But then what about your meta?)
<3

Date: 2014-02-12 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Awwww, THANK YOU!

But...what meta? Wha...?

Date: 2014-02-12 06:49 pm (UTC)
eidheann_writes: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eidheann_writes
You have on occasion posted stuff that's not fic.

"Oh hey these are my thoughts on writing"
{scorching sex macro}

"I had a great day!"
{scorching sex macro}

"What's the deadline for =fest=?
{scorching sex macro|

Date: 2014-02-12 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
LMAO! Ah, so that's your answer to everything, is what you're saying? :-D

Date: 2014-02-12 06:51 pm (UTC)
eidheann_writes: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eidheann_writes
Well... it's always TRUE, though.

*toedrag*

Date: 2014-02-12 06:50 pm (UTC)
eidheann_writes: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eidheann_writes
(Sorry, I think I'm probably much funnier in my head than I am outside of it XD)

Date: 2014-02-12 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Well, we probably all are. ;-) But once I got it, it was quite funny! \o/
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Date: 2014-02-12 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
*snort* :-DD

Date: 2014-02-12 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
THANK YOU!!! :-D

Date: 2014-02-12 06:48 pm (UTC)
gracerene: (Default)
From: [personal profile] gracerene
HOT! Love Draco trying to get into character and shower!sex is always fun :) So impressive how much you manage to fit in 300 words!!

Date: 2014-02-12 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophie-french.livejournal.com
Loved it!!! This is brilliant, in only 300 words!!! Fuck lady, you are amazing! :)

Loved everything, Draco is so cute when he tries no to lose it, and I just love shower sex!!!

Well done! :D

Date: 2014-02-12 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
YAY, thank you!!!

Date: 2014-02-12 07:37 pm (UTC)
writcraft: (Default)
From: [personal profile] writcraft
Awesome work as always!! Loved it :D

<3

Date: 2014-02-12 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
YAYAY, THANK YOU!!

Date: 2014-02-12 08:00 pm (UTC)
elrhiarhodan: (Default)
From: [personal profile] elrhiarhodan
Is it wrong for me to imagine them in their thirties playing this game???

And this detail: "though he's stopped short of manufacturing the smell of feet." is fucking brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2014-02-12 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
They're in their 30s to me, so no, not wrong in the least. :-D

Thanks so much, bb!

Date: 2014-02-12 09:27 pm (UTC)
elrhiarhodan: (Default)
From: [personal profile] elrhiarhodan
I AM, OFFICIALLY, A MIND READER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This makes it so much hotter, I don't know why.

Date: 2014-02-12 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
No, we just share a brain. Which explains why I couldn't write a word while you were in Arizona. *SNORT*

I think that's hot, too -- that they're trying to recreate the volatile relationship they had as teenagers and use what used to be hatred, finally doing with it what I'm sure they wish they would have all along. *happy sigh*

Date: 2014-02-12 08:14 pm (UTC)
capitu: (Default)
From: [personal profile] capitu
OH my GOD!

I love the prize they're claiming is to blow the other! And this image of Harry's chin dripping Draco's come, damnit! Even commenting about it, it's too hot. Jesus!

And that hum. Ohh. I'm HEARING it. I swear I am.

I love this, and I love you and this has made me… well, it's probably best if you don't know just how happy it's made me *coughs* Just know I'm a very happy girl. ;)

I don't know how you do it, we've spent plenty of time pondering on the brilliancy of your writing with [livejournal.com profile] eidheann_writes and here you prove it again in 330 words. You're the best. <3 *loves you*

Date: 2014-02-12 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Hahahaha!!! I'm so happy you liked it!!!! <3

Date: 2014-02-12 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zeitgeistic.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] capitu's birthday is like the best fandom holiday. So much awesome stuff.

Date: 2014-02-12 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
LOL. Totally. Thanks for reading, Z! :-D

Date: 2014-02-12 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com
Yum! Love it. So very hot hot hot. Guh!
:)

Date: 2014-02-12 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Thanks so much!!!

Date: 2014-02-13 12:04 am (UTC)
birdsofshore: (Default)
From: [personal profile] birdsofshore
Oh, this is simply delicious. The idea of them roleplaying this (and really not fooling anybody) is divinely hot, and funny, and also sweet, that they would be able to fool around like this and try to make it serious and hot for one another.

And how you could fit all that, and a searing hot shower blow job, into 300 words, I will never know. *is amazed*

Date: 2014-02-13 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Oh! Thank you, Birds!!!

Date: 2014-02-13 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iwao.livejournal.com
This were SO GOOD!!! *wipes drool* Just perfect. <33!

(But of course they were that good, you wrote them!

Date: 2014-02-15 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you, hon! :-)

Date: 2014-02-15 10:25 pm (UTC)
lokifan: black Converse against a black background (H/D: Quidditch love)
From: [personal profile] lokifan
Loved this to bits!

Date: 2014-02-15 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] traintracks.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! :-D

Date: 2014-02-19 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com
Mmm. Fun and hot. :)

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